Rewrite the sentence to make it correct:after the battles at Lexington and Concord and the British retreat from Boston, there were many more battles, and most colonists began to cry for Independence.
More colonist cried out for Independence after the battle of Lexington and Concord and the retreating of the British /Red Coats leading to more blood shed
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Answer:
The end of the battles of Lexington and Agree along with the British withdrawal from Boston resulted in a great cry for independence from the settlers.
Explanation:
The sentence has been rewritten to keep the meaning of the original sentence, but in a more compact and succinct manner, maintaining a coherent and cohesive relationship that brings more comfort to the reader and allows a sequence of facts to be established, allowing the reader to have a more logical understanding of the message conveyed by the sentence.