Rewrite the extract below using features of
descriptive writing.
We arrived at the boat yard and we found our boat. It was early morn-
ing and very windy. The man said we shouldn't risk taking the
boat out
.
We did and we regretted it. The people on the other boat
were not too
happy at all. The day ended well though.
descriptive writing.
We arrived at the boat yard and we found our boat. It was early morn-
ing and very windy. The man said we shouldn't risk taking the
boat out
.
We did and we regretted it. The people on the other boat
were not too
happy at all. The day ended well though.