I've always dreamed of designing Formula One race cars for a living. As a kid, I'd spend hours watching the races, drawing the cars, and building elaborate models. I was a pretty good soccer player, but not as good as my older brother. During high school, I worked very hard studying physics and learning about aerodynamics. I spent summers visiting races and talking to the drivers about what was important to them in a race car.



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