My poem needs work, but I don't know what to do to fix it, any ideas? 
 

Always at war with their minds

Finding themselves lost by their own insanity

Always struggling to find reality

Trapped by the stiffening fear of mortality

Always searching for someone to be their guide

Escaping they find each other

Together they are

Tomorrow they will be

Still dreaming they stay attached

Falling slowly, hand in hand

Always forgetting when you fly you have to land