Thesis Statement Help
Thesis: The creation of the United States secret endeavor, called the Manhattan Project, not only served as a major technological breakthrough in harnessing nuclear power but also halted the Axis powers from winning World War II.
Do I need to revise my thesis statement and add in more stuff or is it good as is.
Thesis: The creation of the United States secret endeavor, called the Manhattan Project, not only served as a major technological breakthrough in harnessing nuclear power but also halted the Axis powers from winning World War II.
Do I need to revise my thesis statement and add in more stuff or is it good as is.