Oh, same here. I did that last semester.
You should make up their names. I named mine Oliver and Todd. Like from the Disney movies. You should also put in the actual name of the circus. You should also fix your grammar. Your LA teacher can mark points off from that. The rising action shouldn't be so lazy. Make this fun by adding things that interest you. It's proven that if you do that, you'll have more fun and get a better grade. The resolution should be that the boys realized the clowns were friendly. The reflection is great. Most people live in constant fear.
Mine was about two poor boys. The circus was magic, so they became rich after going. I like what I wrote, and found interest. If you'd like, I can also review your story you make.
