Grady is writing a draft of an essay about his favorite sport star. The following outline details paragraph two of Grady's essay.


II. Subtopic: Role model

ASupports the Boys Club of America
  1. Gives money to the organization
  2. Plays basketball with boys in his hometown
BAppears in commercials about substance abuse
  1. Knows how to connect with teens
  2. Shares stories about resisting temptation


As Grady develops the draft portion of this subtopic, it is important for him to

Amake sure his punctuation and spelling are correct.
Bconsider using figurative language to describe details.
Cuse a closing statement about the thesis in each paragraph.
Dwrite so that further revisions in the editing stage are minimal.