the bolded section is after the comma


Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:


Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.

Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.


What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

AA longer phrase was converted to a single word.

BA modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

CRedundant phrases were eliminated.

DRepetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.