How can the following information be better written?
Air quality in Smithton improved in May. The improvement was due to the closing of the motor plant in April. It created smog.
AGet to the specific point of air improvement later in the reading since it's not important.
BMove the smog creating comment to the beginning since it's the most important.
CCombine sentences to condense repetitive information about improvement.
Air quality in Smithton improved in May. The improvement was due to the closing of the motor plant in April. It created smog.
AGet to the specific point of air improvement later in the reading since it's not important.
BMove the smog creating comment to the beginning since it's the most important.
CCombine sentences to condense repetitive information about improvement.