Which sentence is not an example of an effective thesis for an essay comparing two texts about hunger in the United States?
A:Drouin and O’Neil are both experienced scholars who write about poverty and hunger in the United States.
B:Although both Drouin and O’Neil agree that hunger in the United States has generally declined since the beginning of the 20th century, Drouin’s use of personal stories makes a more interesting and more readable article.
C:Drouin’s reliance on personal stories makes her argument less convincing than O'Neil’s.
D:O’Neil combines testimony from social workers with economic statistics that date back to the 1920s to craft a more convincing argument than the one Drouin offers.
A:Drouin and O’Neil are both experienced scholars who write about poverty and hunger in the United States.
B:Although both Drouin and O’Neil agree that hunger in the United States has generally declined since the beginning of the 20th century, Drouin’s use of personal stories makes a more interesting and more readable article.
C:Drouin’s reliance on personal stories makes her argument less convincing than O'Neil’s.
D:O’Neil combines testimony from social workers with economic statistics that date back to the 1920s to craft a more convincing argument than the one Drouin offers.