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Title: advertising clothing to teens

Thesis: Are advertisements aimed at teenagers effective? And, are they ethical?

I. advertising aimed at teens is it ethical?

Aaimed at teens
Bethical
  1. Varies
  2. Not ethical

II. Acne commercials

Apossibly aimed at teens
  1. Teenagers
  2. Teens have acne
  3. Puberty
Bback to school advertisements
Cteens to look good for school
Dbeing in style

III. Are advertisement aimed at teens and are they ethical