Which sentence has the most traditional syntax?
She took a deep breath and stepped onto the sidewalk as her tears were drying.
Tears drying, she took a deep breath and stepped onto the sidewalk.
Tears drying and a deep breath, she stepped onto the sidewalk.
With a deep drying breath, she stepped onto the sidewalk with tears.
Which sentence has the most traditional syntax?
She took a deep breath and stepped onto the sidewalk as her tears were drying.
Tears drying, she took a deep breath and stepped onto the sidewalk.
Tears drying and a deep breath, she stepped onto the sidewalk.
With a deep drying breath, she stepped onto the sidewalk with tears.