In the example below, how does the difference between the character's spoken words and internal thoughts affect the story?
"Welcome back!" I said. "It's great to see you again!" I'm about to go on, but then I think: Shut your mouth. Stop being nice. I'm seeing spots. No, I'm dizzy. This is what they call passing out. Don't do that. Don't pass out. Don't fall. Stay upright stay awake.
AIt foreshadows events that will affect the character in the future.
BIt creates a sense of tension between what the character says and thinks.
CIt changes the point of view from one character to another.
DIt introduces a new character who will have an impact on the plot.
"Welcome back!" I said. "It's great to see you again!" I'm about to go on, but then I think: Shut your mouth. Stop being nice. I'm seeing spots. No, I'm dizzy. This is what they call passing out. Don't do that. Don't pass out. Don't fall. Stay upright stay awake.
AIt foreshadows events that will affect the character in the future.
BIt creates a sense of tension between what the character says and thinks.
CIt changes the point of view from one character to another.
DIt introduces a new character who will have an impact on the plot.