A student has written the following thesis statement for her college application essay:
“In my senior year of high school, I demonstrated my leadership abilities by participating in a charity fundraiser in my local community.”
When considering the audience and purpose of the essay, this thesis statement is
Atoo broad for the purpose.
Btoo specific for the purpose.
Cstrongly written and appropriate.
Dinappropriate for the audience.
A student has written the following thesis statement for her college application essay:
“In my senior year of high school, I demonstrated my leadership abilities by participating in a charity fundraiser in my local community.”
When considering the audience and purpose of the essay, this thesis statement is
Atoo broad for the purpose.
Btoo specific for the purpose.
Cstrongly written and appropriate.
Dinappropriate for the audience.