Can someone edit the the middle of my poem by adding literary devices like personification, alliteration, simile's, etc.


Juicy apples

High up in the tree

Sweet and tasty

Red, green that can be

Crunchy and sweet

Dangling from the tree

I hold out my hands

Yelling "Come here, please!"

Waiting, waiting, waiting

Down they drop

Here comes my tasty treat

That will keep me healthy