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Complete the thought to create a sentence with no misplaced or dangling modifiers.


After drumming on his desk,


A.Mrs. Hobson disciplined Stewart for distracting students from their exams.


B.students were so distracted from their exam that Mrs. Hobson disciplined Stewart.

Cexams became so distracting for other students that Mrs. Hobson disciplined Stewart.

D.Stewart was disciplined by Mrs. Hobson for distracting students from their exams


2.You are asked to revise this sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers.



After a long walk in the hot sun, a lovely shade tree came into view.


Which choice is the best answer?


A.There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.


B.After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.


C.A lovely shade tree came into view after a long walk in the hot sun.


D.Coming into view after a long walk in the hot sun was a beautiful shade tree.

Verified Answer :

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Whoever is "drumming on his desk" needs to come right after the comma.

We know that whoever is drumming is a he ("drumming on HIS desk").
• Mrs. Hobson isn't a "he," so A is out.
• "Students" isn't a "he" either (because it's plural) so B is out.
• "Exams" can't drum, so C is out.
• That leaves D. Stewart is totally a dude, so that works fine.

The second sentence has a problem. The subject ("a lovely shade tree") comes right after the modifier, but the modifier DOESN'T refer to the lovely shade tree. That doesn't work. Right now the sentence is saying that the tree went for a long walk in the hot sun. So let's fix it:

• A is wrong, obviously.
• B works. The subject coming right after the modifier is "I," and that's who went on the walk.
• C repeats the error. It's still saying the tree went on a walk.
• D is not only confusing; it's also just wrong. It still says that the tree went on a walk.

Your answer to the first question is D. The second question is B.

Answer:

Number one D and number two would be .After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.

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